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Friday, 8 June 2018

Hot Air balloon adventure

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we
had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is using capital letters.

I need to improve on using more adjectives. We also made a google draw showing the things that
we would take with us in on the balloon.

When I took off, I put my bags in the
air balloons and set up.
Then I took off and saw birds chirping
and people waving to me. When I
looked down, I saw many people.
I shouted “goodbye!” to the people.

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